The lost friend
Today I went to my friend’s
house and saw a note. It said go around to the gateway. So I went to the
gateway and nobody was there, I unlocked the gate and went inside but it was
still empty. I kept walking, suddenly I herd someone knock on the door he was
cold so I let him in. I asked him if he was ok “yes thank you for letting me in” the man in the
black shirt said. He said “I was running from a scary person in a dark red hat
and I think he had your friend?”.
What a mysterious story, Braden... it sounds like the narrator's friend is in a bit of trouble, I wonder what will happen next... I thought you did a great job of creating a spooky story and I could feel the loneliness of the narrator, well done! I hope you have been enjoying the 100 word challenges, keep reading and keep writing!
ReplyDeleteMrs Pratt (Team 100WC)