Wednesday, 4 June 2014

The Lost Friend by Braden

The lost friend


Today I went to my friend’s house and saw a note. It said go around to the gateway. So I went to the gateway and nobody was there, I unlocked the gate and went inside but it was still empty. I kept walking, suddenly I herd someone knock on the door he was cold so I let him in. I asked him if he was ok “yes thank you for letting me in” the man in the black shirt said. He said “I was running from a scary person in a dark red hat and I think he had your friend?”.

1 comment:

  1. What a mysterious story, Braden... it sounds like the narrator's friend is in a bit of trouble, I wonder what will happen next... I thought you did a great job of creating a spooky story and I could feel the loneliness of the narrator, well done! I hope you have been enjoying the 100 word challenges, keep reading and keep writing!

    Mrs Pratt (Team 100WC)

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