Once
there was a little village called motor filed there were
sweet , polite tiny people . One
day giant person came and almost there
destroyed home there were so afraid they dag a hole into the ground until he was gone .He
went and they found a big cream egg, it
was crack open. The builders went to an
see what happened they went and licked it they said it tasted delicious they said to the tiny people
‘come and taste it,’ every one it taste delicious so they went to taste it they
said its fanatic.
Well done Josie. You have included excellent descriptions with super word choices and are beginning to use speech punctuation. Next time try to read your work aloud to check the grammar. I agree...cream eggs are delicious!
ReplyDeleteLouise Team 100WC