Wednesday, 4 June 2014

Alex

One day a unicorn said to himself, “I’m a Rainbow unicorn running in the sky” with his black unicorn friend through the cold gateway. “Best thing ever. Ok mum I’m ready. Take me to school. Bye mum. Hey Blacky!”
“Hey Rainbow! I love rainbow school.’’

“Look the colours are fading away.” Then they go on an adventure to colour world to regain the colour at the school. “This will be hard Blacky.”
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  1. Barbara17 June 2014 at 13:09

    Hello Alex,
    I liked the color theme running through your story. It would be fun to find out what adventure they went on to bring back the color. You have left that to your readers' imaginations so we can think about it. That is a good technique to keep your readers engaged in your story. Good job!
    I hope you continue to post to 100WC

    Barbara McFall Team 100WC
    The Phoenix School, Salem, MA USA

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