Hi, my name is Lucy. I come
from Kenya, Africa. I live in the city Mbale. I want to go to school. I wrote a
letter to the principal of an African state school. My letter goes like this.
Dear Mr principal, I would
really like to go to your school. I am 12 years old and I like dogs. I am
really good at Maths. Please let me into your school. Thank you, from Lucy.
Now I just need to hope that
the principal will let me in his school.
Hello Zac,
ReplyDeleteWriting from Lucy's perspective is a fresh and interesting approach. The hopeful nature of Lucy's request is endearing.
All children deserve an education and Lucy's letter to the principal is proof of that desire.
My suggestion for making your writing even better is to think about adding some more descriptive words to your writing. Rich, vivid descriptive words add interest to your piece and make it more enjoyable to read.
Thank you for sharing your writing,
Gina Felton (Team 100, Iowa USA)